You have provided a basic understanding and analysis of your ancillary texts, explaining what decisions were made and why to an extent, but not elaborating on where ideas were taken from, or how you came to a final decision.
You need to: 1) Explain clearly what type of research was carried out for each 2) Explain what ideas you took on board from this research and how/why you incorporated it into your own work 3) Elaborate on why you think your final products are successful in appealing to your target audience 4) Include pictures to support points made
You have provided a proficient analysis of your ancillary texts, explaining some ideas that you took on board from each group member and why, as well as explaining how you, as a group, came up with the final ideas for your ancillary texts. You have included pictures of each individual ancillary, as well as the final group one, but still need to clarify what ideas were taken from your research and why, as well as explaining WHY certain elements create a certain 'vibe' etc.
You have provided a basic understanding and analysis of your ancillary texts, explaining what decisions were made and why to an extent, but not elaborating on where ideas were taken from, or how you came to a final decision.
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1) Explain clearly what type of research was carried out for each
2) Explain what ideas you took on board from this research and how/why you incorporated it into your own work
3) Elaborate on why you think your final products are successful in appealing to your target audience
4) Include pictures to support points made
You have provided a proficient analysis of your ancillary texts, explaining some ideas that you took on board from each group member and why, as well as explaining how you, as a group, came up with the final ideas for your ancillary texts. You have included pictures of each individual ancillary, as well as the final group one, but still need to clarify what ideas were taken from your research and why, as well as explaining WHY certain elements create a certain 'vibe' etc.
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